tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4037598752847666863.post5446760424303861433..comments2023-10-31T08:17:25.719+01:00Comments on Learning drawing principles: layout georgeMitch Leeuwehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03748196647137310735noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4037598752847666863.post-50361348674482970712008-05-27T22:59:00.000+02:002008-05-27T22:59:00.000+02:00Thanks allot! Gonna try it.Thanks allot! Gonna try it.Mitch Leeuwehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03748196647137310735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4037598752847666863.post-64153768172992202382008-05-27T21:45:00.000+02:002008-05-27T21:45:00.000+02:00Hey Mitch, Nice drawings!As you asked, here's my f...Hey Mitch, <BR/>Nice drawings!<BR/>As you asked, here's my feedback:<BR/><BR/>I think the first pose can be improved with more of a curved line of action, <BR/>Notice that Rex's drawing is flowing and continuous- there is less separation between the body parts, it thins at the neck, like you indicated, but it's one basic shape, both arms are curved, the legs are farther back, chest up.<BR/>I think that on your practice page, the two drawings on the right capture rex's drawings best. <BR/><BR/>It looks like you've applied this in the next one you've just posted: It's more unified, good flow! I can feel the eagerness, and I love the angry face!<BR/><BR/>Can you post the originals for those as well?Amir Avnihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06878436029210223623noreply@blogger.com